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13 Akatghosts chapter 2

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~One year ago~

The First Born Daughter, aka Ensuke, sat quietly on her bed with in her glass prison. She had been in there for nearly half a  month and still no sign of any thing or any one. She figured out what the sign on her door said, First Born Daughter, after hearing the construction workers out side mutter about it. She was hugging her knees and staring blankly at the construction workers, who sat there and stared intensely back. Others were working on the walls around the other eleven empty cubes around her, paying no mind to her.

"We've got one," she heard the blue skinned guy shout. She had learned that his name was Kisame, he was very nice to her. And so was his friend, Deidara, but she noticed that he was always gloomy, unlike Kisame, who jumped at any movement Ensuke made.

At those words, Ensuke lifted her head up off her knees, causing the workers who were staring at her to jump back a bit. Finally, she wasn't going to be alone anymore! The workers had a huge crane over head, the same huge glass cube that was used on her when they captured her was hanging from the giant wire. Ensuke squinted, barely making out the shape of a figure. Actually, several parts of a figure.

They positioned the crane over to one of the containment cubes three down and across to her right. They then opened the bottom of the cube and several pieces fell into the cube filled with poker chips, money, and playing cards. Ensuke had a small fire of excitement and hope burning in her soul. She waited until the humans left before she dared to speak to it.

"Hi," she shouted casually. "What's your name?"

The figure lifted his head with his arm, and Ensuke gasped when she saw that he was decapitated. Actually, he was cut into several pieces. Black tendril like strings were escaping his torn limbs as they attached themselves and formed a completed body. The figured then turned to Ensuke, his eyebrows furrowed and, she noticed, he had several stitches covering his entire body. Black hair, red and green eyes, and all he wore were black Capri pants.

The new ghost frowned at seeing the dead child with an arrow through her head. "My name is Kakuzu," he stated flatly. She smiled widely at him. She then explained to him about all she heard from the humans and what his symbol meant. Kakuzu nodded, muttering "God Damn Humans..."

Ensuke pointed at him accusingly. "Ooh! You said a bad word! You're going to a bad place!"

Kakuzu gave the little girl a look of kill, making her shut her mouth. "Correction," he muttered after a few moments of uncomfortable silence. "We're already there..."
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It was then two weeks later when the humans returned. This time, they dropped off two ghosts. Both were female and both were friendly looking. The one right next to Kakuzu, to his right, was a woman with the left half of her face burnt off. Her cell was marked with the symbol that read Withered Lover. (Ensuke had learned all the symbols after over hearing a conversation with the two Psychics, Deidara and Kisame).

The girl looked at the new ghost closely. She was in a green  hospital gown, with IV tubes attached to her body. Her legs and arms were covered in third degree burns. She had choppy brown hair that stopped at her shoulders and brownie brown eyes. Ensuke found out that her name was Kitty and that she died in a fire trying to rescue her kids. Ensuke had a huge sympathy for her, thinking of her own family.

She also found out that Kitty's kids names were Mizukia, Ayako, and Deikaru. Mizukia was the oldest child and was about to turn 18. Ayako and Deikaru were twins (Deikaru being the oldest) and were 8 years old. Ensuke also found out that Kitty's husbands name was Itachi.

Ensuke also told her story. About her Mother, Father, and older brother Tsukasa. But, it was hard to talk about him, because every time she did, she would burst into tears.

Kitty gave the little girl a sympathetic smile after hearing her story. "I am truly sorry what happened to you, my dear. You shouldn't of had to go through that at such a young age..."

Ensuke flushed with gratitude and embarrassment. She was beginning to really like Kitty. She was like her real mother in a way. And she liked having a mother. And she liked Kitty.

The next ghost, who was in the cell right next to Ensuke to her right, the one that was marked Bound Woman (since Ensuke had a blank wall next the her cell to the left), was a girl named named Oni. Oni was wearing a pretty blue dress with purple trimming. She had metal cuffs on her ankles and wrists, which were connected to chains that hung loosely and dragged on the floor when she stood and walked around. She had blue hair and one eyes was blue and the other purple. She was pretty, and Ensuke nearly cried when Oni told her that she was killed cause her neck was broken and she was raped. (Even though Ensuke had no clue what the word rape meant).

Kitty had covered her mouth. "I'm sorry what happened..."

Oni gave Kitty a small smile. "It's okay..."

Ensuke smiled at them. "It's nice to have other here besides me and Kuzi!" Kakuzu shot Ensuke an irritated look at being called 'Kuzi' but he grumbled something under his breath any ways. Ensuke then scratched the back of her head sheepishly with her right hand, under her arrow. "Uh...Ms. Kitty?"

The burnt woman turned to the child. "Yes, Ensuke?"

"What does rape mean?" she asked innocently.

It went completely quiet in the holding pins.
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It was another two weeks later when they dropped off another ghost. He was placed in a corner cell, to Kakuzu's left. the one that read Torn Prince on it. He had bright purple eyes, and bleach white hair. He also wore a black high school jacket, jeans, and a white shirt. The whole left side of his body was completely burnt and scorched. He also had a base ball bat with him, which he swung and tapped the edge of his cube with. He then began to slam the cube's edges with his bat, the letters glowed red, but held the blow. Kakuzu, who was sitting in a chair in his cell, glared irritatedly at him.

"You can't leave, you moron," he muttered darkly. "None of us can..."

The white haired teen glared at Kakuzu. "Who the fuck are you to tell me what the hell I can or cannot do?!"

Kakuzu glared back. "I'm</b> the one who will get rid of your</b> entire miserable and pathetic existence if you do not shut your trap!"

Kitty covered her mouth with her hands. "Oh dear..."

Ensuke, over the month, had learned not to point out to the ghosts when they cussed, cause it just got them even more irritated at her. So she pointed silently. She didn't really like him, cause he was loud and cussed too much. She could tell Kakuzu wanted to murder him...if he could... Oni paid no attention to them, instead, attended to her flowers.

"What's you name," Kitty asked politely.

"Fuck grandma," the 'Torn Prince' spat. "What's it to ya?!"

Kitty recoiled back a bit, placing a hand on her chest, where her heart use to be. She gasped slightly at being called such a thing. After a few minutes of silence, the new ghost answered, "Hidan," he had guilt hidden deeply in his voice. Kitty nodded, in forgiving and understanding.

"So," Oni spoke up. "What are you in for?"

Hidan shrugged. "Fucking douche bag cut my brakes."

Kitty gasped. "I'm terribly sorry."

"Awe...shut up...," he muttered, sitting in the corner of his cell, not saying any thing more.

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Three weeks went by this time before another pair of ghosts were dropped off. They were put into the cube that was labeled Great Child and Dire Mother. They were an odd bunch, one was a male and the other female. They were strange because the girl only rose to only 3 feet in height, she had freckles, and pale skin. But, she was very pretty. She had green eyes, a green flower in her hair, and orange hair. She wore a brown skirt and a green top. She looked the most normal of all of them (with the exception of her height of course).

The male, looked the most strangest. He wore a big black coat, and rose to over 7 feet tall. He had a giant green Venus fly trap that closed over his upper body, but it was open at the moment. He also had green hair and his face was split down the middle, one side being white and the other black. he was wearing a white tank top.

Hidan scoffed at them. "What are y'all? Freaks?"

The giant glared at Hidan. Kakuzu spoke up for him. "Like you</b> have any room to talk, Hidan..."

Hidan glared at Kakuzu. "I wasn't asking you..."

Kitty sighed as those two began to argue gain. All of them had grown custom to the constant bickering between those two impatient ghosts. Ensuke glanced through Oni's cell at the two and smiled. "Hi! I'm Ensuke, The First Born Daughter, it's nice to meet you two! What's yawl's names?"

The midget woman answered for herself and her friend. "It's nice to meet you too, Ensuke. My name is Melody, and this is my boyfriend, Zetsu-"

"BOYFRIEND</u></b>," Hidan roared, falling to the floor of his cell and laughed out loud uncontrollably.

Zetsu growled at Hidan, slamming his ax at the glass, it didn't do much, but Hidan got the message. The white haired teen shut his mouth and muttered something unintelligent under his breathe. Melody sighed, placing her small hand on Zetsu's knee. "It is alright, my love."

The tall man growled, lowering his ax. Zetsu then gave Hidan the birdy, picked Melody up like she was a toddler and hugged her small form close to him, kissing her forehead. Kitty and Oni awed, Kakuzu rolled his eyes, Hidan began to go on a cussing rampage at Zetsu for giving him the finger, and Ensuke was saying, "EW!!!! Cooties!!!!</b></u>"
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A week later, the humans returned. They had two ghosts, once again. And once again, they were both female. They dropped one right next to Kitty, to her right, the one marked Pilgrimess. The woman was locked in the stocks. She had long brown hair that was tied into a french braid. She wore a black dress that was trimmed with white, almost like a church dress. She was rather too cheery to be a ghost.

The other ghosts was put into the cell on the far end to Ensuke's left. That cell was marked Angry Princess. And Ensuke thought she was as pretty as one too. She had short brown hair and blue green eyes, she also had a pair of glasses on her nose. She was completely nude, with the exception of all the gash wounds that surrounded her entire body. She had a big kitchen knife clenched tightly in her right hand, obvious to the others that it was her murder weapon.

The woman in the stocks shook her head at the nude girl. "No respect these days..." she muttered under her breathe. She then noticed that there was a holding pin right in between herself and the nude girl that was empty.

Kitty turned her head to the stocked woman. "What is your name?"

The Pilgrimess flashed Kitty a heart warming smile. "Liz Smith, at your service! I came here in search of peace, only to have a witch accuse me for kellin' the live stock. Now, even though I am a witch, I'm in the stocks!"

Hidan whistled under his breathe at Liz, thinking that she was mighty fine. Ensuke looked at the sad looking nude girl. "What is your name?" she asked quietly.

"Hana...," the girl whispered. She then began to smear her cube with blood, writing over and over again in her blood 'I'm Sorry...</u>'. when she finished, she sank to the floor and hugged her knees. A very, inaudible "I'm Sorry..." was all Ensuke could hear.

When Ensuke shared what she learned to Kitty, whom she now called 'mom', Kitty nodded. "The poor child. She must of lost someone dear to her..."

Liz nodded in agreement, Hidan began to stare at Liz's ass when she wasn't looking, Kakuzu scoffed, Melody and Zetsu were basking in each others company, and Ensuke didn't under stand very well.

"We'll explain when your older...," Was all Melody said to the confused child.

Ensuke frowned. That was their way of saying, You'll never find out and we wont tell you</u>.

Ever.</u>

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It was a good whole month before the humans returned. What they brought in made everyone gasp in shock, (Or in Hidan's case), disgust. The next ghost was put into the holding cube right next to Melody and Zetsu that read Hammer. Melody was covering her mouth at the sight of him and even Zetsu looked a bit of shock.

The man had bright orange hair with three piercings on both side of his nose. He wore the remains of black Capri pants and shoes. His body was punctured all over with rail road spikes and in place of his left hand was a sledge hammer. His black swirled eyes held a angry fire in them as he stared coldly at the other ghosts.

Hidan narrowed his eyes. "What the fuck is your name?!"

The new ghost stared long and coldly at Hidan, making the white haired ghost shift on his feet and tap the end of his baseball bat gently on the floor. "My name is Pain," he stated flatly after a whole minute of staring at Hidan.

Kakuzu sighed, picking up his right arm off the floor, since it had fallen off. "You'll have to excuse that idiot. He has the brain of a goldfish..." he then placed his arm back into place and the strings attached themselves.

Pain glanced over at Kakuzu, and nodded quick and short. Kakuzu returned the favor, already starting to like the guy. If anyone could make Hidan shut up, they were an automatic friend.

"W-what happened to you," Oni asked, staring at the newest ghost in complete and utter sympathy.

Pain turned his attention to her. "This is the work of of our society so called "justice". My wife, Konan was murdered and they did nothing about it! So, when I tried to do something, I got it beaten into me...everywhere..."

Oni, Melody, Liz, and Kitty all had tears in their eyes when they heard his wife was murdered. Ensuke had huge bug eyes as she continued to stare at Pain. Hidan scoffed and Kakuzu nodded his head in understanding. Hana and Zetsu remained quiet, not knowing how to react to that.

Liz shook her head to get rid of her tears, since her hands were of no use. "Well...for all that it is worth...be glad that you are here now and not out there..."

Pain glanced at the witch, an eye brow arched. But he nodded anyways, not sure by what she meant.

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It had been a long eight months later before the humans had returned. Except, all the humans looked like they were clawed to death (with the exception of Deidara, who was forced to stay away from this ghost for reasons only Wioshi knew). When the new ghost was brought in, however, everyone </u></b>noticed.

Whatever it was that was in the containment cube, right in between Hana and Liz, was howling and screeching madly, slamming itself into the walls of the cube repeatedly. There was a skittering noise, and all of them realized, to their horror, that the person was clawing at the glass. Oni watched on curiously, impulsively putting her hands to her ears as the newest ghost was dumped into the cell marked Jackal.

The ghost fell to the ground, but quickly scrambled back to its bare feet, and threw itself at the door of the cell. She wore some kind of strange metal cage on her head, with the bars in front of her face ripped outward. Bright, wild red eyes darted all over as she continued to scratch at the glass, causing a terrible sound. The noise was soon drowned out by the woman's constant screeching and howling. Kitty heard Liz mutter something about Hell's Winter.

Melody got a good look at this new ghost. The woman wore gray pants, a torn and tattered strait jacket. The sleeves dragged on the floor when the woman would stop to run to the far end of her cell and then ram into the door once more. The woman had wild dirty blond hair that came all the way to her waist. Some of it seeped out from between the bars of her cage. There was also a red portion of it tied up into a ponytail, which also stuck out of the bars. She had a long wolf tail, as well as big wolf ears. Multiple scratches covered her face and she had giant breast that were squished in the jacket.

"You crazy bitch, will you fucking stop your god damned screaming," Hidan shouted over the howling. Ensuke, who was terrified for the first time since being there, was huddled under the covers in her cell's bed, she covered her ears, trying to escape that terrible sound.

Kakuzu was covering his ears as well. "You aren't getting out of there! It's futile!"

But she didn't stop, nor showed any sign that she heard Kakuzu. She kept howling, throwing herself against the glass. After several terrible hours of nonstop shrieking, slamming, and clawing, she finally stopped, dropping down onto her butt on the floor, panting heavily.

"Thank God," Zetsu muttered for the first time. He had been covering Melody's ears, trying to shield her away from the terrible creature. Melody was shivering in fear, clutching onto Zetsu's shirt tightly in her little hands.

Kitty considered trying to talk to the woman, but was terrified of setting her off on another screaming rampage. Or worse. But, Hidan, being Hidan, did it for her. "What in the fuck</u></b> is your problem!?"

The woman turned her head in a inhumanly matter to stare at Hidan. For once, Hidan ran to the far corner of his cell, huddled into a tight ball. Even Pain shifted uncomfortably.

Then, a long, eerie silence followed.

Abruptly little giggles rang out of the insane woman's cell. But, is suddenly spiraled into a howling, mad laughter as the woman rolled back and forth on the ground, kicking and flailing her arms at the same time. Liz shook her head in pity. "This one is cracked..."

Kakuzu nodded, as did the majority of the ghosts. then, much to everyone's shock, Hana spoke up. "Please...tell us your name..." Hana ignored all the stares she received from her bravery.

The woman stopped laughing, but only for a short bit. Long enough to say, "Shein!", then go back into her laughter fit. Hana nodded, retreating to her bathtub to gloom.

After a minute, Ensuke then uncovered her head, only to come face to face with Shein's stare and wide grin. Ensuke reluctantly moved from under her covers and sat at her door. If she had a heart, it would be bursting from her chest. She would admit, Shein scared the crap out of her.

After a few minutes of continuous stare, Shein then abruptly howled and slammed against the glass, making a scary face and shouting, "BOO!!!</b></u>"

Ensuke let out a high pitched scream and dove to under her bed, crying for Kitty.

Everyone groaned as Shein began to laugh her ass off once more.
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Two weeks later and they finally dropped off the final ghost. He was placed into the only cell that was open to Pain's right that was marked Juggernaut. He had long black hair, red eyes, and wore a gray uniform. He was covered from shoulder the toes in bullet holes. The name tag over his chest pocket read Madara. He rose to about 7 feet in height.

Ensuke squinted as she read the name tag, whispering Madara under her breathe.

At the name, Hana quickly got out of her tub and squinted to see what the new ghost looked like, but she couldn't very well due to where she was located. The name Madara strikingly familiar to her. for once, since she had been dead, she had a small look of hope in her features. Shein stared at Hana, a huge impulse coming to her, for now, she had this huge erg to kill Hana. But, for some odd reason, she couldn't.

Kitty smiled widely at this new ghost, hoping he was on of those friendly giant type. "Hello there," Kitty greeted kindly as she read his name tag. "Madara..."

Madara nodded. "Good evening to you, ma'am."

Kitty nodded, grateful of his manners. "What are you in for?"

"Well," Madara began. "I lost my fiancee and went insane and the cops busted me for killing some hitchhikers..."

Hidan scoffed. "Great...a pansy boy..."

Madara shot Hidan a look of kill. "Mind that tongue of yours boy! Or I shall rip it all</b></u> the way out of that pathetic skull of yours and see how far it can stretch!"

Hidan closed his mouth, shocked. Everyone looked at Madara with 'What-the-fuck...?' faces and Shein burst into a fit of laughter. "Someone agrees!" the Jackal shouted, throwing her arms into the air and laughing. Oni glanced at Shein, shaking her head.

Hana gasped loudly, dropping her knife on the floor of her cell. "M-Madara?!" Hana asked, not sure if she was believing all the things she was hearing. Everyone turned to her. Even Shein went quiet.

Madara, at first, looked around like he heard a voice in his head, he didn't believe what he heard. But, when Hana said it again, his eyes went wide. "H-Hana...?" Madara pressed his hands up against the glass. "My love...is it really you?"

Hana's eyes grew wide, her face becoming brighter. "Yes! Yes my love! It is I!"

Tears came to Madara's eyes as he fell to his knees. "I thought you were gone..."

"No," Hana replied, breathlessly. "</i>I was lost...now I have returned to you!</i>"

Madara sighed in relief. He then grew angry. He got to his feet, his face red with frustration as he began to punch the cube walls with his bare fists. "Let me out! Damn you mortals!"

Pain sighed. "You're wasting your time...there is no escape..."

Oni nodded. It was sad, but true. "We are all locked in here...for some sort of reason..."

"This is our punishment." -Hana.

"Our twisted sanctuary." -Melody.

"This...is all of our own personal hells..." -Hidan.

"Forced to be caged like wild animals for the humans own amusement..." -Shein.

"Forever..." -Ensuke.
Yes!!!! Finally! Another chapter!!!!!!! :iconfurrydanceplz:

Took me long enough too! :iconheaddeskplz:

Well, upon request from :icononi-kaibutsu:, I finally finished another chapter! Thank you, Oni! :tighthug:

In this chapter, I wanted to focus a bit on the ghosts themselves!

And at the end, I thought it would be cooler if I did it like that, because, to me, it would of ruined the moment if I had put something before or after. So, I just put the name of whoever said what.

Hana (c) :icontyde07:

Shein (c) :iconmotoko03: (Me.)

Oni (c) :icononi-kaibutsu:

Kitty, Liz, Melody (c) :iconmotoko03: (Me) and :icontyde07:

Mizukia (c) :iconmizukia:

Ayako (c) :iconneoia:

Chapter 3 is currently being cooked up! So...enjoy your meal while I get dessert ready! :XD:
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OmigodItotallywanttodrawallofthemcanIatl eastdrawtheshein-jackalpleeeeeasssseeeee!!!!!!
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Your writing has really gotten good, sis! I can't wait for the next one!